Keblinger

Keblinger
.....from this hypocrisy & pretence......
What if this isn't everything it should be????

I'm not even sure how I feel....!! !!

Maybe somewhere, someone loves me so much;
He'd share his life with me and my whole life he'd touch;
Maybe somewhere, someone longs to hear me call;
Or maybe, yes, I realized, maybe there is none at all...

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Yet another Adieu!

| Monday, May 3, 2010
Just a simple goodbye,but IT HURTS ....!!

---------Part 1---------


I love you.
I love you too.
Say those three magical words again please..

"I love you,sweetheart!!!!"

"I love you too Shona" replied He.

"I can't live without you even for a single moment.You mean the world to me."

"Even I can't live without you,jaan."

Their love story was one of a kind.It seemed as if they genuinely loved each other.Those late night conversations,meeting stealthily in the college hallways,staring at each other and smiling,looking for excuses to meet each other,those messages from one corner of the college hallway to the other,giving each other loving looks when seeing each other in the canteen and going to the library on the pretext of studying only to be together[a few tables away]....

But...There was something strange about their STORY!!Something which wasn't even close to "LOVE"....

The guy never ever called up the girl.He never bothered to know how was her day.He never cared to ask with whom was she talking.He only talked through messages,and that too when he felt like.He replied when he felt like,He met only when he wanted to and he talked only about the things he liked and he wished to talk about..

Yes,the girl obviously knew all this.She wasn't a kid.She wasn't an immature teenager in love.She overlooked everything just because she loved him truly and couldn't afford to lose him.She never complained,Yes she did expect from him 'cause she always thought of her love as someone like "Raj" of the 1995 Bollywood movie DDLJ...But her love seemed to console her that someday he would understand her silence.

She always tried to convey him indirectly that messages are not enough for any relationship,but he was not concerned much about the girl,it seemed.

Obviously,the girl cared a lot more and loved him more than he could ever imagine...

It was not a very long time since they were in a relationship.It was hardly 20 days...The girl thought of gifting him something as a memory of their relationship,as a token of her love.

She prepared a card for him.It was not a very artistic one,but it was sure to make anyone's heart fall in love with it.... :)

A simple "I love you" on a piece of paper,but it was not JUST A PIECE OF PAPER...It was a PROMISE,a promise to be kept forever....

The girl told him about it...and....

No,it was not at all like she expected.
Everything went wrong.
The guy denied accepting the "stupid" card.

For a moment, the girl's world came crashing down.Her heart was shattered,crushed and SMASHED...

It seemed as if someone had ripped open her heart and cut it into a million pieces...

She somehow controlled herself,and just took all this lightly.She was too scared to lose him.She had no other option,but to endure all that by her own.She could not share it with anyone in the world-not her mom,not her sister,not her friends,NO ONE!

Yes,distance had already made its way between both of them....

-----To be continued after July...

5 opinions:

{ Tushar Mangl } at: Saturday, May 08, 2010 said...

Oh O

Not fair on the male species.

You are painting them bad :-P

:-)

Anyway,
please don't delay the second part, dying to read what happened next.

{ Where thoughts are Word$ } at: Saturday, May 08, 2010 said...

Ya sure..Thanks for the comment.Will make the second part soon.

And it is not intended to paint the male species bad...Rather,it targets on how silly can girls get,sometimes.Guys are pretty practical and they MOVE ON!! :)

{ BokHaile8854 } at: Sunday, May 09, 2010 said...

真正的友誼,有如健康失去時,始知其價值 ..................................................

{ Tej } at: Sunday, May 09, 2010 said...

Really written good...cant expect writer's imagination but just wanna give a thought for second part....as I imagined......


hmmm....seems like guy is playing and girl totally fall in love.....I think Girl should stop it now and smash him if he tells again about Love.....this type of ppl do flirting and play with emotions......

{ Where thoughts are Word$ } at: Sunday, May 09, 2010 said...

Yup...In the second part the story will end !! :) lets hope I can think of a happy ending :):):)

Either a realistic ending or a happy ending...

Everyone,Please comment on the ending,if possible.

 

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